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Old 10-14-2003, 11:28 PM
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whats with all this talk about "vixens"???

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Mention "vixens" and Larry wakes up from a deep sleep!! HAHA!!
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Thats pretty good kid...keep it up. I'll be lookin for chapter 3
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Here hrk.. this was the version u sent me "Enjoy NOS. Let me know if you like it and I will continue.



The behemoth pulls up to the light on Main Street between two ricers, a Honda Civic and a Mitsubishi Eclipse. In the Civic is a spike haired Hmong, about 20. In the Eclipse is a bald-headed Mexican wearing a red bandana, maybe 24. Billy revs up the engine to about 1,500 RPM’s and both ricers look over. The Eclipse give a fart back just as the Civic turns on some high tempo techno music and turns left.

The light turns green and Billy punches it. The dual pro-street tires smoke and the 39 Ford pulls out ahead of the Eclipse.

Billy slams it into 2nd gear as the Eclipse pulls up next to the Ford. Both drivers make eye contact for at least 15 seconds until Billy hits it into 3rd gear.

As Billy shifts it into 3rd speed, Pete glances over and the ricer boy hits a couple shots of Nos. The Mexican eyes bulge as the Mitsubishi falls way behind the Ford and a broken drive shaft sends sparks all over the empty pavement.

“What happened?” asks Pete to Billy

“Should we go help?” says Billy answering his own question by putting the car into park.

As Billy and Pete walk up to the Eclipse, the Mexican comes out of his car with a crowbar.

“You broke my car homes, now you must pay chico!”

The man runs toward Billy swinging the crowbar like a madman. Billy does a kungfu chop to the mans forearm causing him to drop the bar. The man tries to punch Billy but he catches his fist and puts it behind his back and throws him to the cement.

“It’s not my fault man, blame it on your cheap Mitsubishi products. I will help you fix it but you will have to pay for it.” Says Billy helping the man up.

“Thanks my name is Manuel. Wanna go get a drink?” asks Manuel.

“I’m only 16 but if you’re interested in buying me a Soda, I will be much obliged.” Says Billy as the three of them walk towards the bar labeled “Smokey’s Lounge and Grill."

Now u dont have to keep writing 2 different versions.. but u do have to keep writing.. lol..

Looking for chapter 3

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Very nice HRK.I used to write some stories myself,but nothing like that.I might have to pick up my pen and go to work again !

Keep up the good work!!

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Old 12-22-2003, 01:22 PM
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I will try.....(and by try I mean when I am bored).....to write some more over X-mas break. I have a few chances now to write, but if I feel like it I am sure I can get around to it. YAWN!!!


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great Story!!!

Kid you have a gift; And I suggest to you keeping the pen to the padd and you will write enough stories to really see that 9 second car parked in your driveway KEEP IT UP!!!!
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HRK, you show some potential. Check out your local library, ebay, or some used book stores for books by Henry Gregor Felson. He wrote hot rod stories back in the fifties, I think you'd like him, he's a good story teller. Dan
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